谢孟臻指考英文作文是写和一位同伴出游，因她喜欢阅读英国文学，特别是莎士比亚著作，因此梦想能和莎士比亚出游，文章除歌颂大自然也提到莎翁的名著哈姆雷特、罗蜜欧与朱丽叶。
谢孟臻同学的这篇作文全文如下，各位看看为什么阅卷老师要扣去0.5分：
If I were ever fortunate enough to have the opportunity to go anywhere with a pa
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谢孟臻指考英文作文是写和一位同伴出游，因她喜欢阅读英国文学，特别是莎士比亚著作，因此梦想能和莎士比亚出游，文章除歌颂大自然也提到莎翁的名著哈姆雷特、罗蜜欧与朱丽叶。
谢孟臻同学的这篇作文全文如下，各位看看为什么阅卷老师要扣去0.5分：
If I were ever fortunate enough to have the opportunity to go anywhere with a pa
rtner of my choice, I would choose Shakespeare as my companion. As
the greatest poet and playwright in the history of English
literature, he would be bound to have great knowledge and insight
into what we call beauty; thus the artistic side of me would be
refreshed with nourishments of the dazzling world of
imagination.
Together we would read his immortal classics and fall for the eternal love between Romeo and Juliet, and laugh at the irony behind the foolish conducts of Hamlet. After the warm-up, my creative brain cells would be put into full gear, and we would set off on our journey.
We would go hiking together. The birds would chirp above our heads as a warm welcome, and in return Shakespeare would immediately write down yet another masterpiece to thank their hospitality. We would waltz under the emerald green shade to the rhythm of rustling leaves, and for a rest we would sit on the banks of a brook and talk about books and music as fish swim around our bare feet.
As we ascend the hill, blazing rays from the sun would try to stop us in our paths, but a cool breeze would caress our cheeks, taking the sweat and tiredness away as they sing a melody of harmony to urge us on.
Finally, when we reach the hilltop, we would peer down at the rolling hills beneath and up at the clear blue sky above, and as we amuse ourselves with the twisting clouds transforming into a million different shapes, Nature would begin its grand symphony to celebrate our triumph, and at that moment, we would understand, from deep in our heart, the untold significance and beauty of Nature.
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Together we would read his immortal classics and fall for the eternal love between Romeo and Juliet, and laugh at the irony behind the foolish conducts of Hamlet. After the warm-up, my creative brain cells would be put into full gear, and we would set off on our journey.
We would go hiking together. The birds would chirp above our heads as a warm welcome, and in return Shakespeare would immediately write down yet another masterpiece to thank their hospitality. We would waltz under the emerald green shade to the rhythm of rustling leaves, and for a rest we would sit on the banks of a brook and talk about books and music as fish swim around our bare feet.
As we ascend the hill, blazing rays from the sun would try to stop us in our paths, but a cool breeze would caress our cheeks, taking the sweat and tiredness away as they sing a melody of harmony to urge us on.
Finally, when we reach the hilltop, we would peer down at the rolling hills beneath and up at the clear blue sky above, and as we amuse ourselves with the twisting clouds transforming into a million different shapes, Nature would begin its grand symphony to celebrate our triumph, and at that moment, we would understand, from deep in our heart, the untold significance and beauty of Nature.
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