1997-2016年全国卷英语短文改错（含答案）
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1997-2016年全国卷英语短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
NMET 1997
Dear Bob,
Hello.I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang.
I’d like to your penfriend, and get to know more about your
country. First, let me tell you something more abo
ut myself. My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the
capital of China. I go Hongqi Middle School. We study quite a few
subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. I use to play
ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interesting in
football. Do you play any ball games? What your favorite sport? I
look forward to hear from you soon.
Yours, Li
Hua
NMET 1998
My Favorite Sport
My favorite sport is football. I was a member of our school
football team. We practise for three times every week and often
watch football match on TV together. Play football not only makes
us grow tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and
team spirit. We must keep mind that we play for the team instead
ourselves. Also, the sport teaches us the important of obedience
(服从). Each player must obey captain, who
is the leader of the team. And they must not break the rules too
often if we want to win the game.
NMET 1999
The Problem with Television
Now I can’t watch much television but a few years ago I was
used to watch it every night. I was often a little tired after a
day’s work and watch TV demands very little effort. Unfortunate,
there are too many people among my family. Some wanted to see the
programme while others preferred another. I am happy with any
programme but the others spent a lot time arguing and there was no
way of settle the matter except by selling the TV set. Now someone
at home reads instead.
2000 春季
Dear Peter,
Thanks very much on inviting me to your birthday party on
Sunday. I’d like very much come but had an examination on Monday
morning. It is a very important exam but I can’t afford to fail it.
I’ll spend all the whole weekend reading and prepare for it. So I’m
really sorry that I won’t be able to come in this time. Hope you
can understand. I’ll take this chance wish you wonderful time on
your birthday. Happy birthday, Peter, and many happy return of the
day!
Yours, Li Ming
NMET 2000
The day before the speech contest
(比赛) English teacher talked to me. She
said that she and my schoolmate all wished me success, but it
didn’t matter that I would win or not. When I was in the stage the
next day, I felt so nervous as I shook like a leaf. There were so
many people present! Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English
teacher in the crowd. She was smiling but nodding at me. I
remembered her words and calm down. I did a good job and won the
first prize. Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the
library. Whenever I see them I will often think of my English
teacher.
2001年（全国卷II）
Like most of my schoolmates. I have either brothers nor
sisters, in any other words, I am an only child. My parents love me
dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a
good education. They did not want me to do any work at family; they
want me to devote all my time to my studies so that I’ll get good
marks in all my subject. We may be one family and live under a same
roof, but we do not seem to get much time to talk about together.
It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. Do
they really understand their own daughter? What things are in other
homes, I wonder.
2002年（全国卷II）
Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei
Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows. it’s famous mountain with
all kinds of plants and animal. The weather was fine. It was about
noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were
very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting
temples and told stories. On the way I was busy taking picture
since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly.
Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the
mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so
tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the
pillow.
2003年（全国卷II）
When I first learned write in English, I ran into many
difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in
Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher
advised me to keep my diary. I followed her and should put down 100
words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper
as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote
a little story and showed to my teacher. she liked it very much and
reads it to the class .All said the story was a good one . Their
word were a great encouragement to me.
2004年（全国卷II）
Dear Ralph,
I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would describe myself
as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult
for me to do things well as them. I'm sure they will laugh to me
and see me as fool. So I feel unhappy every day. Besides, I have
few friends. I don't know that they don't like to talk with me.
Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class, but after
class we become stranger at once. I am trying to improve the
situation since it doesn’t seem to work. Can you tell me about what
I should do?
Yours, Xiao Wei
2005
年（全国卷III）
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to thank you with your kind help. Before
you came to teach us, I had not interest in English. My
pronunciation was terribly. I could only speak a few words.
But one and a half year later, I now think English fun to learn. I
got a lot of from your encouraging words. I will always
remember what you said, “If you try to, you can be No. 1!” I
hope you’ve had pleasant journey home and will come to China
again sometimes in the future. I will write again and
send you the photos we take together.
Yours sincerely, Li
Min
2006年（全国卷III）
An American and a Frenchman decided to cross the sea between
France and England in the balloon in 1784. High over the water,
they discover a hole in the balloon. The hole became bigger and
bigger. The air keeps the balloon up was escaping quick and the
balloon was coming up. The two men threw all their equipment into
the water to make the balloon light. It started to rise higher
again. So it was still too close to the water. Finally, the men
threw away most of his clothes to save themselves. The crowd
waiting for to greet them in England was very surprised see this
when the balloon landed in front of them.
2006年（全国卷II）
We had guests last night who have not stayed in a B&B
hotel ago. They did not want breakfast because that they were going
out early in the morning. They came back lately and had some tea. I
came in the living room and saw one of them just go through the
kitchen door but turn on the light. He was looking for a glass the
cupboard. He had no ideas that the kitchen was not for guests. I
just smiled to me and thought, “What can I do? We are guests after
all.”
2007年（全国卷II）
Dear Grandpa,
Thank you for your letter. My school is organizing a
basketball team and there’s just a chance which I can join it. I'm
little of course, but terribly quick and bravely. While the others
are jumping about in the air, I can run under my legs and get the
ball. It will be lots of fun for practicing out in the playground
in the afternoon with the tree around us all red and yellow and
everybody laughing and shout. These are the happier girls I've ever
seen and I' m the happiest in all! I meant to write long letter and
tell you all the things I' m doing at school, but the bell was
ringing, so I just have to stop here.
Love, Judy
2008年（全国卷I）
Dear Alice,
I have just got some good mews to tell
to you. I win a national prize for painting last week. My father
was so pleasing that he suggested I go to England for a holiday.
I’d like to staying there for half a month, visiting place of
interest or practicing my English as well. We’ve been writing to
each for nearly a year now. I have often dreamed of talk face to
face with you. I imagine you’ll be at vacation yourself by that
time. Perhaps we could go out do some sightseeing together.
Best, Lily
2008年（全国卷II）
If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 29th Olympic
Games, I will at first improve my English so that I can talk easily
about foreign visitors. Second, I will learn more about history of
the Olympics as good as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third, since I was
familiar with Beijing, I can help visitors find their ways in the
city. Finally, I should be able to tell visitors about our history
and culture or show them their great achievements. In short, I will
do my best to help making the Games a success.
2009年（全国卷II）
Hi Susan,
I’m sorry that I wasn’t able to return to your bike on time
yesterday. I mean to give it back to you before four in the
afternoon, and I was hold up on my way back. Just before I turned
corner of Park Street, I happened to see an accident. The
little girl was hurt and her mother needed help. So I helped them
going to the nearest hospital. I stayed here for one and a half
hour and made sure that the girl was all right. When I got back, it
were already 6 pm. I hope you understand.
Thank you!
Li Ling
2010年（全国卷I）
It was a chance of a lifetime to win the first prize
on the Story Writing Show. All I had to do was to write a
story or present it. My teachers have been telling me how
great my writing was. So if they had said was true,
I would have a chance of winning the prize. What were
better, I had useful help. There was Uncle Chen, gentleman
living near my house, who was a very much famous writer.
He agreed to reading my story and give me some
advices on how to write like a real writer.
2010年（全国卷II）
Christie was one of my best friend at high school. At that
time, we often spend time together.
Thank to her help, I made great progress in my
study. Last year, she decided to study to abroad. In other words,
we would be separated long time. Before her leaving off, I prepared
a gift to show my best wishes to him. She
said it was the best gift she has ever had. From then on, we’ve
kept touch with each other through e-mails. I look forward to see
her again in the near future.
2011年（全国卷I）
One of my unforgettable memory of my school in Xinjiang is
that of lunches we brought from our homes. I hold my
lunch-box in my hand when I was going to school. The smell
from it was very good. Since the lunch bell finally rang, my
friends and me met under a tall tree and had our lunches. My
best friend Aigulie was used to share her Nang with me. Nang
is a specially kind of cake in Xinjiang. I like them very
much. Now Aigulie and I study at different colleges
or we can only see each other during the summer vacation. I
think over her a lot and I miss the food and the good time
we had together.
2011年（全国卷II）
Dear George,
It's been a week after we left your family and we are now
back home. Thank you very much for showing them around your city
and providing us for the wonderful meals. After we said goodbye to
you, we went to Washington D.C. ,that we
stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond of the museums
there that he begged my parents to staying another couple of day.
However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back
last Saturday afternoon. It was really a nice experience. If you'd
like to make trip to our city some day, I will be better than happy
to be your guide.
Yours, Mike
2012年（全国卷I）
Every one of us can make a great efforts to cut off the use
of energy in our country. To begin with, all of us can start
reducing to the use of oil by driving only when we have a real
need. That won't easy, I
know，but we have to start anywhere.
What's more, we can go to work by bike once and twice a week, and
we can also buy smaller cars that burn less oil. Other way is to
watch our everyday use of water and electric at home. For example,
how many times have you walked out of a room and leave the lights
or television when no one else was there?
2012年（全国卷II）
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you opinion about water saving. Water is
important. We, as well as animal, cannot live without water and
neither agriculture or industry can go without it. Yet it seemed
water is becoming less and less. Many countries in the world find
we don’t have enough water. To deal with a problem, I think, we
should first go all out to plant trees though trees will help save
water. Next, no drinking water should left running. Third, we
should find ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially
bath water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water.
Sincerely, Li Hua
2013年新课标1
I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on
her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away.
She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather
very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned
from black toward gray over the
years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in
our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even
scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do
homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never
known.
2013年新课标2
The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in
Britain．It is said to have started in the
early 1800’s．Have tea in the late
afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might
not be served until 8 o’clock at
night．This custom soon becomes another
meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British
porcelain（瓷器）industry．Tea
in China was traditionally drank from cups without
handles．When tea got popular in Britain,
there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British
habits．This made for the grow in the
porcelain industry．
2013年
(全国一卷）
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week
when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the
downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by
public transport.
We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I
liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the
room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my
friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was
wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local
dish.
It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any
friend of me who is going toBeijing.
2013年
(全国二卷）
Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I
rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another
car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I
called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew
that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther
away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I
told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil.
As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right
thing to do.
2014年
(全国一卷）
Nearly five years before ,and with the
help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry
tomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden, since
then---for all these year---we had been allowing tomatoes to self
seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing
somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There
are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although
we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,
but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are
growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost!
2014年
(全国二卷）
My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m.
They are three lesson in the morning and two in the
afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore , we
have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do
reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every
day.
My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds
of the flowers and trees around the classroom, buildings. We can
lie on the grass for a rest, sat by the lake listening music. The
teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our
teachers but also our friends.
2015（全国一卷）
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I
would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home
in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green.
Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the
environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that
global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The
airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare
animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your
environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret
it.
2015（全国二卷）
One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his
parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He
liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After
looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where
his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman
saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes
later. Tony saw parents. Mom said, “How nice to
see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony
promised her that this would never happen again.
2016（全国一卷）
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that love
.Though not very big ,but the Restaurant is popular in our area .It
is always crowded with customers at meal times .Some People even
had to wait outside My uncle tells me that the key to his success
is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high
quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never
dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes
that our business will grow steady.
2016（全国二卷）
The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking
about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at
home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but
there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn
little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you
view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates
suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it
is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a
lot.
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