对比查错—背写出错之处。
第一篇:做好小事的重要性(功能句式大集锦)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a
short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description
of the picture and then express your views on the importance of
doing small things before undertaking something big. You should
write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

首段:图画描述
(引入图画)This is a simple but thought-provoking cartoon: (图画描述:人/物 动作
环境 文字) the youngster/ guy expresses his worries about “disposing of
nuclear waste”; to his surprise, his father responds/answers: “If
you can empty the dustbin here, you can do anything.”
二段:图画主题 现象 意义
(图画联系主旨) Obviously, this picture can be naturally associated
with the importance of doing small things: (主题评论) if youngsters
intend to achieve success, it is advisable for them to begin with
little things. (现象概述) In the contemporary society, it has become a
trend for a host of teenagers to ignore tiny things in life:
cleaning rooms, washing clothes and emptying dustbins. (相关人 感受)
Meanwhile, an increasing number of young people find it rather
useless or unnecessary to deal with these
things.(举例) A
case in point is the boy in the picture. However, (意义) it is these
small tasks that enable youngsters to build up adequate knowledge,
ability and experience. (万能总结) As a matter of fact, intelligent
people in large numbers have come to realize the significance of
doing small things.
(补充举例2)Taking a look around, we can notice a great many young
people like the boy in the picture.
(意义句补充) Doing small things brings us
skills, arouses our
enthusiasm/ passion for success, and helps us to make
progress.
尾段:观点 建议 展望
(观点:尾段首句万能) As a college student, I am convinced that it is
of great necessity for youngsters to enhance ourselves by doing
small things. (万能建议) Thus, we should educate, advocate and
encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to cultivate
this awareness/habit. (展望1:)Sparing no efforts to do so, we can
witness a hopeful and promising future of our life, work and study.
(展望2:) Do bear in mind: no small progress, no success. /small
progresses lead to a big success.
相关话题词汇:(做好小事是一种优秀品质或正能量,那么此相关的词还有很多,不妨认识一下?说不定这次就考到了)
自信Self-Confidence
诚实Honesty
谦虚Modesty
奋斗Strive
团队精神&合作Teamwork Spirit &
Cooperation
竞争Competition
实事求是The Fittest Is the Best
社会公德Public Morality
礼貌Politeness
提高个人修养Shaping the Morality
爱心Love
责任Responsibility
美丽Beauty
理解、谅解Understanding
可持续发展Sustainable Development
美德Virtue
谨慎Prudence
尊老爱幼Respect the Old and Care for the Young
仁义道德Virtue and Morality
挫折与坎坷Twists and Turns
逆境Setbacks
成功无捷径There Is No Shortcut to Success
终身学习Life-Long Study
从小事做起Start from Small Details
人生处处面临选择We Are Always Faced Various Choices
幽默感A Sense of Humor
沟通Communication
身心健康Physical and Mental Health
捐献Donation
人才的素质The Qualities of the Talents
业余爱好Hobbies
爱国主义Patriotism
感谢对手Expressing Thanks to Our Rivals
欣赏Appreciation
关爱True Love
信念Conviction
奉献 Contributions
梦想 Ambitions
勤奋Diligence
耐心Patience
成功Success
机遇Opportunity
挑战Challenge
勤俭节约Thrifty
创新Innovation
拼搏精神The Determined Spirit
奉献精神The Dedication Spirit
和谐社会Harmonious Society
打好基础的重要性The Importance of Fundamentals/Basic Skills
第二篇:英语学习(万能素材救命作文)
话题:On English Learning
内容要求(提纲):
1. 英语很重要
2. 学习英语中的困难
3. 如何学好英语
【参考范文】
In the contemporary world, English learning
has gained great popularity and it is of great significance for
youngsters to learn English well. Based on a survey, a majority of
international organizations or firms acknowledge that they prefer
recruiting employees who can speak English fluently.
However, a host of English learners may
have a variety of difficulties or troubles in learning. For
instance, a large number of students find it difficult to memorize
new words. Frequently, it is also difficult for them to understand
rules of English grammar. In addition, though some are good at
reading or writing, they fail to express themselves freely in oral
English.
Then, how to get a good command of this
language? I am convinced that practice makes perfect. Only practice
can help me to master grammatical knowledge and remember new words.
And it is also through practice that I can speak and write
fluently, and there is no other way. I deem that if I try my utmost
to practice English every day, the future of my English learning
will be promising and hopeful. (179words)
译文:
在当今世界,英语学习受到普遍欢迎,而且年轻人学好英语很重要。根据一项调查,绝大多数国际组织或公司承认他们更偏爱招聘英语流利的员工。
然而,很多英语学习者可能在学习中有诸多困难或麻烦。例如,很多学生发现很难背会生词。他们也经常很难理解语法规则。此外,尽管一些学生擅长读写,但未能使用口语流利表达自我。
那么,如何学好这门语言。我相信熟能生巧。只有练习实践能有助于掌握语法规则同时背会单词。也正是通过实践我能在说和写方面变得流利,别无他法。如果我全力去每天练习,未来我的英语学习将充满希望。
相关话题词汇:(与学习相关的词汇也可以用到第一篇的扩展词汇,此外还有很多,不妨认识一下?考到你就爽了)
熟能生巧Practice Makes Perfect
读书的快乐The Pleasure of Reading
拼搏Struggling
放弃 Give Up
应试教育 Test-oriented Education System
面试前的准备Preparation for the Interview
助学贷款Students’ Loans
正确择业 Choosing the Right
Career
能力Ability/competence
创新Innovation
感谢Gratitude
悲观心态Pessimistic Mind
乐观心态Optimistic Mind
失败Failure
知识Knowledge
自律Self-Discipline
无目标的Aimless
珍惜时间Cherishing Time
大学生就业难It’s Difficult for University Students to Look for
Job/Difficulty Hunting for Jobs of College Students
失学Dropping Out of School/Leaving School
只注重考试成绩Exam-Oriented Education
死读书Study in a Rigid Way/Stressing Only Exam Scores
第三篇:教育汇报(图表作文)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a
short essay entitled Education Pays based on the statistics
provided in the chart below (Weekly earnings in 2010). Please give
a brief description of the chart first and then make comments on
it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180
words.

首段:图表描述
(引出图表)This is a simple but enlightening chart by US Bureau of
Labor: (图表描述万能) in 2010, it had become a trend for doctors, masters
and bachelors to earn more money in a week in US--- $1551, $1272
and $1038. Meanwhile, other individuals could not enjoy
satisfactory earnings, if they did not receive better
education.
二段:主题评论 现象 意义
(图表联系主题)Obviously, this chart can be naturally associated with the
importance of education: (图表内容评论)if individuals intend to acquire/
get better earnings, it is advisable for them to gain higher
degrees. (现象)In the contemporary America, it is a common phenomenon
for a host of companies/ firms/ corporations/ organizations to
hire/ employ/ recruit doctors and masters and pay them better
salaries.
(相关人 感受) And an increasing number of youngsters
find it rather difficult to get better jobs, if they do not get
better education. (意义) It is education that enables them to build
up adequate knowledge, skills and ability to deal with important
tasks. (总结)As a matter of fact, employees and employers in large
numbers have come to realize the significance of higher
degrees.
尾段:观点 号召
(观点)As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great
necessity for youngsters to enhance ourselves by studying hard and
getting better degrees. (号召)Do bear in mind: education is or means
a worthy investment.
第四篇 行动的重要性
Directions:
For
this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting
on the saying “Never go out there to see what happens, go out there
to make something happen.” You can cite examples to illustrate the
importance of being participants rather than mere onlookers in
life. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180
words.
【试题解析】
就本题而言,很多同学读懂了“Never go out there to see
what happens, go out there to make things
happen.”这句话,但依然懵逼不知写什么。根本原因在于“只见树木不见森林”, 忽视了“You can cite examples
to illustrate the importance of being participants rather than mere
onlookers in life.”这句话的提示作用。
提醒各位同学:作文务必全面审题。可以从三个方面入手:体裁和话题、内容要求、字数。本题体裁要求为essay,话题为the
importance of being participants rather than mere onlookers in
life,即“做生活的参与者而不是旁观者的重要性”;
内容要求对话语进行评论,字数限制为120-180,一般而言字数略微超出并不会扣分。
This is a simple but enlightening remark: “Never go out there to
see what happens, go out there to make things happen.” Obviously,
this saying can be naturally associated with the importance of
being participants in life.
In the contemporary society, it has become a trend for some
youngsters to have ambitious dreams for life, work and study.
Meanwhile, a host of teenagers find it exceedingly difficult to
achieve success, if they just wait there to see what happens. A
case in point is English learning. It is constant practice that
enables learners to accumulate adequate grammatical knowledge,
vocabulary and fluent oral English. As a matter of fact,
intelligent individuals in large numbers have come to realize the
significance of being a participant rather than an onlooker.
I, as a college student, deem that it is of vital necessity for
youngsters to refuse to be merely onlookers. Do bear in mind: being
merely onlookers can never make things happen. Accordingly, we
should encourage our friends and classmates to take actions
immediately to realize their dreams.
【参考范文】
这是一个简单但有启发性的话语:不要只是出去看发生了什么,而是行动起来让事情发生。显然,这句话能自然联系到在生活中做行动者的重要性。
在当今社会,一些年轻人普遍拥有对生活、工作和学习的伟大梦想。同时很多年轻人发现如果只是等待旁观,就很难实现他们的梦想。一个典型的例子就是英语学习。正是不断的练习使得学习者能积累足够的语法知识、词汇和流畅的口语。事实上,很多聪明的人们都已经意识到做行动者而非旁观者的重要性。
作为一名大学生,我相信年轻人很有必要拒绝只作旁观者。牢记:只作旁观者永远有成效。因此,我们应该鼓励自己的朋友和同学们立即行动起来实现梦想。
第五篇 给父母的感谢信
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a
letter to express your thanks to your parents or any family member
upon making a memorable achievement. You should write at least 120
words but no more than 180 words.
【试题解析】审题时,务必关注“体裁、话题、内容要求”。只要肯仔细看题,即可发现:体裁要求为“letter”,内容要求为“express
your thanks to your parents or any family member upon making a
memorable
achievement”。因此,写作话题为感谢信,重点围绕题干中“名、动、形、副”四种词展开写作即可保证作文不跑题。
【写作提纲】
首段:写信目的,并致谢
中间段:写难忘的一次成功(如英语比赛、英语考试好成绩)
尾段:再次致谢并祝愿
【参考范文】
Dear Parents,
Today, I am writing this letter to express my thanks to you,
because I made a memorable achievement in recent English Speech
Competition.
During my high school study, I had a variety of difficulties in
English learning. For instance, I had great trouble in memorizing
new words. In addition, it was also difficult for me to understand
rules of English grammar. Though I could write and read, I could
not express myself freely in oral English. Then, you encouraged me
to participate in the English Club. Gradually, I am convinced that
practice makes perfect. It was constant practice that enabled me to
build up adequate knowledge, skills and competence in making
speeches in English. Finally, I succeeded in this competition. Your
encouragement brought me power, aroused my enthusiasm for English
and helpd me to make progress every day.
As your child, I deem that suppose I intend to achieve greater
success in future, it is advisable for me to set a greater goal.
You make me believe that if I try my utmost to do everything, the
future of my life will be hopeful and promising. Thanks again, my
dear parents!
Yours Kid
Sky
【参考译文】
亲爱的父母:
今天,我写这封信想要表达对你们的感谢,因为在最近的英语演讲比赛中我取得了令人难忘的好成绩。
在我高中学习期间,在英语学习中我遭遇过各种困难。例如,我在背单词方面有困难。此外,我也很难理解语法的规则。尽管我能读能写,但是我无法用英语口头流利表达。然后,你们鼓励我参加英语聚乐部。逐渐,我相信熟能生巧。正是不断的练习使得我积累了足够的英语演讲方面的知识、技能和能力。最终,我在这次比赛中取得了成功。你们的鼓励带给我力量,唤起我对英语的热爱并帮助我每天取得进步。
作为你们的孩子,我认为如果我想在未来取得更大的成功,我就应该设定更大的目标。
你们让我相信如果我尽最大努力去做每件事,未来的生活将充满希望一片光明。再次谢谢亲爱的爸妈!
您们的孩子
Sky