个星期!对我来说,这段时间也是煎熬,因为编辑部只给了一个月时间修稿!
问题回答完了,数据也补充上了!这样有些段落就需要重写了!这个时候一定不要怜惜以前的文字,改修改的修改,重写就重写了!这样对文章整体是有好处的!
问题回答了,数据补充上了,文章也做了很大的修改!该投了修改稿了!一看时间离限定时间只有两天了!就着急投了!也算该放心了!可是又遇到另一件令人揪心的问题,就是投稿过程中需要递交一份revision
notes! 一时没有明白这是什么,该怎样写?都没有模板的!就急匆匆问一位以前投过cancer letters
的师姐,问她头修改稿时需要递交的manuscript, manuscript with tracked changes,
revision notes
分别指啥,该怎样写?(因为之前投的peptides不需要这些的)。但是收到的邮件却是,你自己看看啊,时间长了我都不记得了!
这可该怎么办呢?死马当活马医了!就硬着头皮写了个revision notes
(修改记录),其中我也就把修改的地方大概罗列了些,总共写了十几条吧!就投了, manuscript
就是修改过的文章编辑好,manuscript with tracked changes 就把文中修改过的地方用红色标了出来
。总之,这样弄了也比过了限期好啊!
就这样在中复杂的心情中投了出去,心里蛮担心的!投出去第一天一天至少看邮箱5次以上!呵呵,以前师姐说她的修改稿投过去后一周多才有消息的!所以想着等上一周再说,但是一开电脑还是忍不住查邮件!焦急啊!第二天早上中午也是这样!到下午的时候,由于试验比较忙,就没有看!偏偏这个时候电话也停机了!
晚上回到宿舍打开电脑,还没有想着查邮件,就想开QQ看看留言!突然一个很久都没有闪动的头像闪动了,是我师兄发给我消息的,说让我看看邮件,
cancer letters
应该接收我那篇文章了!惊奇啊,做了重大修改的文章,也不需要我再修改了,就直接接收了!呵呵,我想应该有两方面的原因:一,说明老外也想着中国人的英语就那样了,再不为难了!二,说明我的英语也还行(哈哈,当然是自吹自擂了)。总该接收了就是好事啊!
其实,在投稿过程很多东西并不是很难准备的!但是不知道是怎么回事,就总希望能够找到个模板之类的参考参考!我这样找了,没有找到让我很沮丧。所以就把我自己的贴出来,希望能够对没有投稿经验的同仁有所裨益!
附件1:主编的信,与审稿人意见!
Dear professor ***
This is to let you know that we have reviewers comments on your
manuscript. Although the reviewers found the study interesting,
they raise a number of serious points that do not allow me to
accept the manuscript on the basis of currently available
presentation.
Manuscripts receiving this rating can be re-submitted, after
vigorous amendments, using the same manuscript number. Please note
that normally they will again be sent out to the same reviewers for
inspection.
Should you re-submit the manuscript, please explain in an
accompanying letter point-by-point how you have dealt with the
criticism.
Please refer to our author guidance notes at:
http://authors.elsevier.com/JournalDetail.html?PubID=506050
Yours sincerely
Professor M. Schwab
Managing Editor
Cancer Letters
Reviewer #1: Referee 1 (CAN-D-XX-XXXXXX)
......
Overall, it is a well conduced investigation, but I have several
suggestions about the present manuscript.
General points
1. English needs a minor revision.
2. The concordance of several verbs (time) should be revised.
3. Why ......?.
Major points:
.....
Minor points:.....
这个审稿人应该是主审,意见还行!但是对英语描述都提出了意见!但是还是比较有希望!
Reviewer #2: Comments to Authors:
......
there is no mechanistic basis studied as to how it
causes cytotoxic effects in these cells except measuring for some
early and late indicators of type of cell death it induces and
measuring mitochondrial membrane potential which is already known.
Never the less, the main strength of the study is the in
vivo data
......
But the major drawback is
not having .......
This seems to be important and should be
considered in designing in vivo experiments.
Specific Comments:
.....
这个审稿人应该是副审,虽然问题不是很多,但是对文章的评价还是很不客气的。需要非常认真的对待他所提出的问题!
附件2:修改稿的投稿信及response to reviewers,revision notes:
Dear Editor/Reviewers:
Thanks a lot for your kindly reviewing of the manuscript entitled
“......” (CAN-D-......). Thank you very much for your helpful
suggestion. We are pleased to follow the referee’s suggestions and
criticisms. The manuscript has also been extensively revised
according to the comments. The specific modifications are shown
below. The modified parts have been marked by
red in the
revised manuscript.
Thank you again for your attention to our manuscript. It
would be highly appreciated if you are kind to give a favorable
consideration on it. We look forward to hearing from you
soon.
If there are other errors or further requests,
please contact us by e-mail.
Kind regards,
Sincerely yours
写得也确实够谦虚啊,随写得不好,但是也还好用。
details of response to reviewers:
Response to reviewer # 1’s comments:
General points
Thank you for your prompt attention to our manuscript and thanks a
lot for your helpful suggestions. We are pleased to follow your
criticism and the manuscript has been extensively revised according
to your suggestions.
Major points
It is our carelessness not to ..... And following your criticism,
we have ..........
Minor points:
Thank you for your attention to our manuscript and we appreciate
your detailed and professional advices. According to your comments,
we revised the manuscript to incorporate your commendations and
criticisms. In addition,
we have modified this
paper repeatedly to reduce the grammar mistakes and inaccurate
description as far as possible. ......
Response to reviewer # 2’s comments:
1. Thanks a lot for your attention to our manuscript and we
appreciate your professional and detailed criticisms and
suggestions. The corresponding explanations of each point which is
raised in your comments as follows:
2. Following your advice, we have corrected the misspellings and
unclear sentence. In addition, we have modified this paper
repeatedly to reduce the misspellings, the grammar mistakes and the
inaccurate description as far as possible. The modified parts have
been marked by
red in the revised manuscript.
3. Following your professional advice, we have.....
See
figure..... and section .......
......
5. Following your professional advice, we also supplemented
....... The data were supplemented in Table.1. See Table.1
and section 3.7.
.....
Other changes:
1. Thank you for your prompt attention to our manuscript and we
appreciate your detailed and professional advices. According to
your comments, we revised the manuscript to incorporate the whole
recommendations and criticisms of the referees. In addition, we
have modified this paper repeatedly to reduce the grammar mistakes
and inaccurate description as far as possible. The modified parts
have been marked by
red in the revised manuscript.
2....... We have supplemented this in the acknowledgements section
and marked this by
red in the revised manuscript.
3. We made a minor modification for
...... The modified part
was also marked by
red in the revised manuscript.
写的虽然比较啰嗦,但是还好用哦!毕竟觉得很谦虚啊(有时候觉得有些过谦了)。很有参考价值的哦!
revison notes:
Following are the revisions of our manuscript entitled “.......”
(CAN-D-XX-XXXXXX).
1.
In the Abstract section, sentence “......” was
replaced by “.....”
2.
We deleted “......” in Introduction section, because
M&M section is a more appropriate section to insert this
figure.
3.
We insert “(.......)” into the last paragraph of
introduction section to explain .......
4.
We corrected paragraph 2.1. 'Reagents' instead of
'regents', and ......and commercial suppliers in this section also
were supplied.
5.
The abbreviation of “......”, “....” was given in the
section 2.6. All the abbreviations appeared in section 2.7, 2.8,
3.3, and 3.5 have been replaced by “.....”.
6.
We gave ......, and corrected the sentence
“.......” instead of '........”
7.
We have supplemented the data of ......
.Section
..... and section ......have been rewritten
correspondingly.
8.
Reference cited in section
..... was removed to
..... section.
9.
The discussion section has been made a minor
modification.
10. We supplemented .....control in Fig.1, and the interpretation
of fig.1 also was revised.
11.
We supplemented the data of
...... in
Table.1.
12.
......
13.
We correct some typewriting errors which were appeared
in our manuscript.
14.
We apologized for our poor English. We tried our
best to improve it in revision.
15.
In order to highlight the change what we have
done, the modified parts have been marked in
red in the
revised manuscript.
16.
If there are other errors or further requests,
please contact us by e-mail.
Other changes:
1.
......
2. .......
这我觉的可以作为一个很好的模板使用。
附件3:修改稿投过去后,主编会的信:
Ms. Ref. No.: CAN-D-XX-XXXXXR1
Title: .......
***************************************************
Up again: :::::::
2006 Impact Factor is 3.277
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*********************
Dear professor XXX,
A final disposition of 'Accept' has been registered for the
above-mentioned manuscript.
Kind regards
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本人在此贴这些想着能够为广大为论问奋战的同仁一点参考。希望能够给予大家帮助,以共勉!