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教学是一种享受--chainoflove续写

2022-04-24 16:08阅读：

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出自必修三u2 的乡村音乐，改为读后续写
Chain of love
He was driving home one evening
In his beat up Pontiac庞蒂克汽车
When an old lady flagged him down
Her Mercedes had a flat
He could see that she was frightened
Standing out there in the snow
'Till he said 'I'm here to help you ma'am
By the way, my name's Joe.'
She said 'I'm from St. Louis
And I'm only passing through
I must've seen a hundred cars go by
This is awful nice of you.'
When he changed the tire, and closed her trunk
And was about to drive away
She said '
pan >How much do I owe you?'
Here's what he had to say
'You don't owe me a thing
I've been there too
And someone once helped me out
Just the way I'm helping you
If you really wanna pay me back
Here's what you do
Don't let the chain of love end with you.'
Well a few miles down the road
The lady saw a small cafe
She went in to grab a bite to eat
And then be on her way
But she couldn't help but notice
How the waitress smiled so sweet
And how she must've been eight months along
And dead on her feet
No, she didn't know her story
And she probably never will
When the waitress went to get her change
From a hundred dollar bill
The lady slipped right out the door
And on a napkin left a note
There were tears in the waitress's eyes
When she read what she wrote
You don't owe me a thing
I've been there too
And someone once helped me out
Just the way I'm helping you
If you really wanna pay me back
Here's what you do
Don't let the chain of love end with you
That night when she got home from work
The waitress climbed into bed
She was thinking 'bout the money
And what the lady's note had said
As her husband lay there sleeping
She whispered soft and low
Everything's gonna be alright; 'I love you, Joe.'
1. 简单画出chain of love 图示
2. 找出细节描写：动作，表情，心理等
3. 找出高级句式。
Lucy described the lady to Joe, and Joe was really surprised._______.


They decided to do something special.__________.


第一段的续写--平淡
The lady sounded like the one Joe helped before. Joe asked what the lady had left. Then Lucy brought the note and read“Don't let the chain of love end with you”. Joe was touched and wanted to cry. Joe then told Lucy how he had helped this lady.
第一段的续写--改进
The lady sounded like the one Joe helped before. To make it sure, Joe asked what the lady had left. Then Lucy brought the note, reading softly“Don't let the chain of love end with you”. Hearing this, Joe felt a lump in his throat, tears in his eyes. How can it be! Joe then whispered Lucy how he had helped this lady with pride. Lucy’s eyes twinkled with disbelief and pride.


They decided to do something special.__________.

教学是一种享受--chainoflove续写
教学是一种享受--chainoflove续写
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教学是一种享受--chainoflove续写
教学是一种享受--chainoflove续写

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