推荐英语作文“让城市的环境更加美好”
2010-05-13 15:30阅读：
在目前的英语作文训练中，重视培养学生的语言能力提到了日程上来。本文主要从例举信息的角度着手写作。我们首先读题找出要点，关注城市污染，采取保护城市的行动，再从自己已有的知识储备中收集语言表达的相关信息。
第一步读题。分析要点或可写的内容：
作文题目
向全校师生写一封倡议书“让城市的环境更加美好”，谈谈我们的城市存在各种污染，让我们从自己做起，采取哪些行动，来改善我们城市的环境。要求词数在100-120之间。文章开头已给出，不记入词数。
第二步例举。学生可以在稿纸上写出城市污染方面的内容,可繁可简：
Litter is everybody's problem. It's up to all of us not to litter.
Putting garbage in its place sets the foundation for a clean and
beautiful city.
Chemicals like oil, chlorine (used for swimming pools), cleaners,
pesticides and fertilizers can harm the animals, bugs and plants
that live in the water, and can make people sick when it floats
down to the ocean.
The waste from our pets is very harmful to our water bodies. Our
pets' waste has dangerous bacteria that can spread diseases to
plants, animals and humans that swim in dirty water.
Soaps and detergents
, like too many leaves and grass clippings, can take oxygen out of
water and suffocate plants and animals.
Air pollution from cars could pollute our water. All the
bad-smelling, gray/black/brown/blue gases that come out of a cars'
tailpipes floats up into the air and eventually lands on the ground
or in a
river, lake or ocean.
第三步例举，从学生的角度，采取保护城市行动的句子：
- Plant trees and flowers to make our city beautiful.
- Walk or ride a bicycle to school instead of taking a car.
- Save water while doing some washing.
- Do not leave waste paper, cans etc on the ground in a public
place.
- Put the rubbish into different parts in order to be used
again.
- Use cloth bags or basket instead of plastic bags while
shopping.
- Clean the waste of our pets immediately.
- Give the place a spring cleaning
- Let's roll up our sleeves and help make our city clean, green,
and beautiful!
第四步成稿。注意简明扼要，短文篇幅保持100-120词数之间：
A Proposal to Make our city clean and beautiful
May 4, 2010
My dear schoolmates,
We live together in the city of Nanjing,
breathing the same air around. It is our duty to make our city
cleaner and more beautiful.
We live together in the city of Nanjing, breathing the same air
around. It is our duty to make our city cleaner and more
beautiful.
Now our city is facing some serious problems. As more people own
cars today, and this becomes a main cause of the air pollution.
Waste water in our daily life makes the rivers smell. And we use
too many things made of plastic. It’s important for us to take
actions to protect our city.
As a student, everyone can do many things to help. First, let’s
walk or ride bikes to school. Second, we should clean the rubbish
in time and often keep open the doors and windows of the classroom.
We can also put the rubbish into different parts to be used again.
Third, we try to use paper bags instead of plastic bags while
shopping. Finally, we should plant more trees and flowers around
us.
My dear schoolmates, join us and do something now！Our city will
look nice and beautiful if every one takes actions from now
on.
Yours sincerely,
All students of Class 1, Grade 9
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