四级作文辅导二:图表类作文(范文、模板、必备句型。对了,还有作业)
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图表分析型模版
图表作文的命题目的并不是简单考查考生描述图表表面内容的水平,而更着重于测试考生分析问题,即对图表深层含义领会挖掘的能力以及阐述能力。
审题时增加了读图的步骤。
文章中要考虑关键数据的引用.即体现趋势或者变化的重要数据,而绝对不能毫无目的地大量照搬堆砌.
两种形式:一种是统计表(table),另外一种是统计图(graph), 如:曲线图(line graph)、柱形图(bar
graph)和饼图(pie graph)等。
Table 统计表
Line chart
曲线图
Bar chart
柱状图
Pie chart
饼图
图表作文的体裁以说明文和描写文为主。
写作模式:
第一段:描写数据的主要变化趋势,对数据进行分析比较,总结归纳图表表面所呈现的主要特征。
第二段:分析揭示表象后面的原因。
第三段:下结论。
举例
Rising Divorce Rates in China
1、描述图表所反映的问题
2、你认为最近几年中国离婚率高的原因是什么
布局谋篇
1、结合题目及提纲,
可判定这是一篇图表作文,是一个柱状图表;体裁是说明文,文章主题是最近几年中国离婚率的情况。
2、依据提纲内容,转换成相应的三段式结构模式:
第一段
概述图表内容,尤其是突出的数据变化。
第二段 分析这些变化产生的原因。
第三段
指出最近几年中国离婚率高反映了社会什么问题。
范文
1)
As is clearly shown in the chart, China has experienced a
dramatic increase in the divorce rate between 1967
and 2007. 2) Especially, during the last
decade, the divorce rate in big cities has increased as much as it
had in the previous thirty years.
(描述突出的数据变化)
3)
There are three reasons for it.
4)
To begin with, legal changes have simplified procedures,
removed barriers to divorce. 5) In addition, there has been
a significant change in social attitude towards the divorced
people.6) For example, the divorce is no longer considered a
social stigma.7) Last but not the least, the change in
personal economic activities also facilities divorce. 8) In
short, the upward trend in divorce seems to be a mirror of some
important changes in Chinese society.
9) As for
me, the statistics
reflect the change in people’s view of
marriage and family life. 10) On the one hand, divorce is no longer
an embarrassing topic in china. 11) On the other hand, it’s
people’s right to choose divorce if there is an emotional breakdown
in their marriages. 12) In brief, divorce is an appropriate way to
solve some problems in marriage and family life for some
couples.
模板 1
1) As is clearly shown in
the chart,______ between ______and _____. 2) Especially,
____. 3)There are three reasons for
___.
4)To begin with,_____. 5) In addition, ____.
6) For example,_____. 7) Last but not the least,
______. 8) In short, ______
9) As for me,______. 10)
On the one hand, _____. 11) On the other hand,_____.
12)In brief,______.
模板2
范文
第一段:说明图表
开篇句:As the bar
chart shows, the
number of people below the poverty line decreased dramatically
during the years of 1978 to 1997.
扩展句:
1. As early as 1978,
about 250 million people were under the poverty line.
2. Then seven years later,
the number became three fifths that of 1978.
3. And arriving in the year
1997, the number was reduced to 50
millions.
第二段:解释图表变化原因
n主题句:Several factors contribute to
the sharp decrease of the
below-poverty population.
扩展句:
1. The reform and opening
following 1978 enabled the peasants to become much better off.
(原因1)
2. With the development of
Chinese economy, that policy also improved city dwellers' lives
greatly.(原因2)
3. Furthermore, the
high-tech introduced made it possible for the country's economy as
a whole to take off. (原因3)
4. All these result in
the great fall of the Chinese population below the poverty
line.
第三段:提出解决办法
结尾句: However, a
further decrease in the number of poverty-stricken people is faced
with some problems.
扩展句:
1. With quite few employees
being laid off, the effect of which is not only discouraging, but
also challenging.
2. So my principle is to pay
due attention to the 'newcomers', but not just to care for the
poor, say , in remote mountain areas.
模板 2
n第一段:说明图表
开篇句:As the bar chart shows,
__decrease/increase__ during the years of__ to
__
扩展句:
1、As early as _____.
2、Then _____ years later, ___.
3、And arriving in the year _, __.
第二段:解释图表变化原因
主题句:Several
factors contribute to _____.
扩展句:
1、______. (原因1)
2、______. (原因2)
3、Furthermore, ______ (原因3)
4、All these result in ____.
第三段:提出解决办法
结尾句: However, ____ is faced with some problems.
扩展句:
1. With _____, ____, the effect
of which is not only discouraging, but also
challenging.
2. So my principle is to pay
due attention to __, but not just to __.
模板 3
It is obvious in the
graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone
dramatic changes. It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably
in recent years (as X varies).
What is the reason for this
change? Mainly there are … (多少) reasons behind the situation reflected
in the graphic/table. First of all, …(第一个原因