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四级作文辅导二:图表类作文(范文、模板、必备句型。对了,还有作业)

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图表分析型模版
图表作文的命题目的并不是简单考查考生描述图表表面内容的水平,而更着重于测试考生分析问题,即对图表深层含义领会挖掘的能力以及阐述能力。
审题时增加了读图的步骤。
文章中要考虑关键数据的引用.即体现趋势或者变化的重要数据,而绝对不能毫无目的地大量照搬堆砌.

两种形式:一种是统计表(table),另外一种是统计图(graph), :曲线图(line graph)、柱形图(bar graph)和饼图(pie graph)等。
Table 统计表

Line chart 曲线图
Bar chart 柱状图
Pie chart 饼图

图表作文的体裁以说明文和描写文为主
写作模式:
第一段:描写数据的主要变化趋势,对数据进行分析比较,总结归纳图表表面所呈现的主要特征。
第二段:分析揭示表象后面的原因。
第三段:下结论。
举例

Rising Divorce Rates in China
1、描述图表所反映的问题
2、你认为最近几年中国离婚率高的原因是什么

布局谋篇
1、结合题目及提纲, 可判定这是一篇图表作文,是一个柱状图表;体裁是说明文,文章主题是最近几年中国离婚率的情况。
2、依据提纲内容,转换成相应的三段式结构模式
第一段 概述图表内容,尤其是突出的数据变化。
第二段 分析这些变化产生的原因。
第三段 指出最近几年中国离婚率高反映了社会什么问题。


1) As is clearly shown in the chart, China has experienced a dramatic increase in the divorce rate between 1967 and 2007. 2) Especially, during the last decade, the divorce rate in big cities has increased as much as it had in the previous thirty years. (描述突出的数据变化)
3) There are three reasons for it.
4) To begin with, legal changes have simplified procedures, removed barriers to divorce. 5) In addition, there has been a significant change in social attitude towards the divorced people.6) For example, the divorce is no longer considered a social stigma.7) Last but not the least, the change in personal economic activities also facilities divorce. 8) In short, the upward trend in divorce seems to be a mirror of some important changes in Chinese society.
9) As for me, the statistics reflect the change in people’s view of marriage and family life. 10) On the one hand, divorce is no longer an embarrassing topic in china. 11) On the other hand, it’s people’s right to choose divorce if there is an emotional breakdown in their marriages. 12) In brief, divorce is an appropriate way to solve some problems in marriage and family life for some couples.

模板 1
1) As is clearly shown in the chart,______ between ______and _____. 2) Especially, ____. 3)There are three reasons for ___.
4)To begin with,_____. 5) In addition, ____. 6) For example,_____. 7) Last but not the least, ______. 8) In short, ______
9) As for me,______. 10) On the one hand, _____. 11) On the other hand,_____. 12)In brief,______.

模板2 范文
第一段:说明图表
开篇句:As the bar chart shows, the number of people below the poverty line decreased dramatically during the years of 1978 to 1997.
扩展句:
1. As early as 1978, about 250 million people were under the poverty line.
2. Then seven years later, the number became three fifths that of 1978.
3. And arriving in the year 1997, the number was reduced to 50 millions. 

第二段:解释图表变化原因
n主题句:Several factors contribute to the sharp decrease of the below-poverty population.
扩展句:
1. The reform and opening following 1978 enabled the peasants to become much better off. (原因1)
2. With the development of Chinese economy, that policy also improved city dwellers' lives greatly.(原因2)
3. Furthermore, the high-tech introduced made it possible for the country's economy as a whole to take off. (原因3)
4. All these result in the great fall of the Chinese population below the poverty line.

第三段:提出解决办法
结尾句: However, a further decrease in the number of poverty-stricken people is faced with some problems.
扩展句:
1. With quite few employees being laid off, the effect of which is not only discouraging, but also challenging.
2. So my principle is to pay due attention to the 'newcomers', but not just to care for the poor, say , in remote mountain areas.

模板 2
n第一段:说明图表
开篇句:As the bar chart shows, __decrease/increase__ during the years of__ to __
扩展句:
1As early as _____.
2Then _____ years later, ___.
3And arriving in the year _, __. 

第二段:解释图表变化原因
主题句:Several factors contribute to _____.
扩展句:
1______. (原因1)
2______. (原因2)
3Furthermore, ______ (原因3)
4All these result in ____.

第三段:提出解决办法
结尾句: However, ____ is faced with some problems.
扩展句:
1. With _____, ____, the effect of which is not only discouraging, but also challenging.
2. So my principle is to pay due attention to __, but not just to __.

模板 3
It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes. It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years (as X varies).
What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are … (多少) reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table. First of all, …(第一个原因

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