2016上海中考英语作文 I'm ready 范文

2016上海中考已经结束，今年的中考英语作文题—I'M READY，附上范文一篇。

5. Today, I want to say I'm ready to get on my way to my dream. 1. after the baptism of the Senior Entrance Exam, I know I am well-prepared to set new goals in my study in a senior high school and improving my way of learning.

I am ready to be away from my parents in a boarding high school. It's necessary for me to learn to live on my own, 2.just as a young eagle tries to strech its own wings.

I am ready to make more new friends and meanwhile, share my news, problems and pains with my old buddies

Anyway,3. after all the ups and downs, I will still be courageous towards the future. 4. I'd like to say 'I am ready!' loudly and confidently to every tommorrow.

作文五点分析:
1. after the baptism of...经过。。。的洗礼,起个粉墨登场的效果.
2.一眼就能识别的比喻句
3. 人生的跌宕起伏，用词要老练。
4. 首尾呼应，结尾有力