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2016.06.16雅思写作第一时间解析+范文

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2016.06.16雅思写作大作文第一时间解析+范文
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2016.06.16雅思写作第一时间解析+范文
大作文原题目：
Some people think that it is beneficial for our country to send young people to university，while others argue that graduates could be unemployed which is bad for the country.
Discuss both views and give your won opinion.

题目译文：
一些人认为把孩子送去大学去接受大学教育对国家是有益的，而其他人认为毕业生可能会失业，这对国家是有害的.
讨论双方观点并给出你的观点.

话题类型：
教育类当中问：教育目的

话题频率：
高
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题目分析：
这个题目是由下面的这个05年的老题变来的
 母题：
It is generally believed that education is of vital importance to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies.
What should education consist of to fulfill both these functions?
由此拓展的子题有：
a. 大学应当教授理论知识还是实践技能？
b. 大学的是应当把学生培养成合格的公民还是让他们自己得益？
c. 准备未来职业最好的方法是上大学还是尽快离校积累工作经验？
d. 大学要不要扩招？
e. 应当提供通才教育还是专才教育？

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范文参考：
It has been believed that attending colleges is of great benefit for the whole country’s development. However,some students can not find a job after leaving school,which is an unsecured factor for the society. In my opinion, it is much better to go to university if students are offered more opportunities to combine theory and practice.

Ø For the young ,there are several advantages in receiving higher education. It is obvious that university education-systems are based on the belief that every students can effectively be taught to acquire different and professional skills and there are much more facilities like laboratories with advanced equipments and libraries full of encyclopedias. By making full use of these sources, graduates can master these skills by constant learning and guided practice and they are more likely to make big progress in academic study and research. This with no doubt would benefit them in future development.

Ø However, graduates’ unemployment seems to make the whole countries fall into trouble. There are several reasons for this. First, teaching more theoretical subjects may be responsible.When students enter into job market, they find it hard to put these acquired theories into practice and gain an offer because jobs in workplace tend to need practical skills and knowledge. Another one is that unrealistic expectation from graduates may also lead to their unemployment. Young adults know little of the situation of the labor market and always highly value themselves ,so they ask more than what they deserve like higher salary ,less working hours and much better welfare. Such requirements are always considered as unrealistic and unmatched for employers.

Ø In conclusion, attending college is necessary if universities can provide more job consultancies and job-training courses for undergraduates.




小作文题型：
饼图

考查内容：
2009年某国移民原因的比例

考题频率：
2016年第3次

参考资料：
C8T2


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