en shouted loudly “there is someone,a baby,still living”.
Through some efforts,rescuers cleaned up
the ruins carefully which blocked her.Under her body lay her
baby,who was wrapped in a small red quilt with yellow flowers
scattered in red.He was about 3 or 4 months’ old.Since well
protected by mother’s body,he was totally safe.He was sleeping on
both ears when the rescuer carried him out,and his lovely and
peaceful face warmed everyone around him.The doctor along with the
rescuing team unfastened the quilt to check if the baby was all
right,and he found there was a mobile phone filled in the quilt.The
doctor looked at the screen subliminally,a written message was
already there: “My dear baby,if you could live,don’t forget how
much I love you”.As a doctor,he experienced too much of parting
forever;but at this moment,he wept.The mobile was passed,every
person who saw this message shaded tears.
Section One Warming Up and Reading
Ⅰ.Leadin
1.Who can remember what happened in Yushu,in Qinghai Province in
the year 2010?
A terrible earthquake broke out there on April 14th.More
than 2,200 people were killed.
2.Do you know any other natural disasters?
tornadoes;typhoons/hurricanes;volcano
eruption;drought;floods;etc.
3.Can you tell some famous land earthquakes?
(1)Pakistan Earthquake:On October 8th,2005,a
terrible earthquake which measured 7.6 on
the Richter scale happened in
Pakistan,Afghanistan and India.And Pakistan was the
most
seriousaffected country,in which 38,000 people
died,62,000 people injured and 25,000 people
were homeless.(2)San Francisco:On October
17,1989,an earthquake measuring 7.1 on the
Richter scale struck San Francisco.(3)The Wenchuan
Earthquake in 2008.
4.Do you know why an earthquake happens?
The plates are moving constantly.Sometimes these two
plates stop and do not move for
years.Then suddenly,they jump and an earthquake
happens.As a result of the movement
of these plates,west America near the sea has
always been a bad place for earthquakes.
5.What do you think may happen before an earthquake?
Mice ran out of the fields
looking for places to
hide.Fish
jumped out of bowls and ponds.The
chickens and even pigs were
too nervous
to
eat.The dog
barked loudly again and again.People
could see
bright lights in the sky.
Ⅱ.速读课文,回答下列问题
1.What happened?
2.Where did it happen?
3.How long did it last?
4.Who helped to rescue the trapped people?
Ⅲ.精读课文,回答下列问题
1.概括每一部分的大意
Part 1(Para.1):
Before the earthquake,strange things
began to happen but no one
took any notice of them.
Part 2(Paras.2~3):
The earthquake destroyed the city of
Tangshan and shocked the
people very much.
Part 3(Para.4):
The army came to help the
survivors,bringing hope for a new life.
2.True or false?
(1)People in Tangshan were warned of the earthquake and
didn’t go to bed that night.(F)
(2)People in Beijing also felt the earthquake.(T)
(3)More than 400,000 people were killed in the
earthquake.(F)
(4)Many rescue workers and doctors were trapped under the
ruins during the aftershock.(T)
(5)People tried to get fresh water from under the ground in
Tangshan.(F)
3.完成下列表格
Main idea
|
Details
|
Signs before
the earthquake
(Para.1)
|
(1)Strange things were happening in the
countryside of northeast Hebei.
The water in the wells (2)rose and (3)fell.
A (4)smelly gas came out of the cracks.
The chickens and even the pigs were too (5)nervous to
(6)eat.
Mice (7)ran out of the fields looking for places to
hide.
Fish about (8)jumped out of their bowls and ponds.
At about (9)3∶00 a.m. on July 28,1976,people saw
(10)bright lights in the sky.
|
Damage caused by
earthquake
(Paras.2~3)
|
At (11)3∶42 a.m.,the (12)greatest
earthquake of the 20th century began.
(13)Steam burst from holes in the ground.
Hard hills of rock became rivers of (14)dirt.
(15)Bricks covered the ground like red autumn leaves.
Two (16)dams and most of the bridges fell.
The railway tracks were now (17)useless pieces of
(18)steel.
(19)Sand now filled the wells instead of water.
Water,food,and (20)electricity were hard to get.
|
4.填入正确的数据
(1)
1/3 of the nation felt the earthquake.
(2)A huge crack that was
8 kilometres long and
30 metres wide cut across houses,roads and
canals.
(3)In
15 terrible seconds a large city lay in
ruins.
(4)
2/3 of the people died or were injured during the
earthquake.
(5)The number of people who were killed or injured reached
more than
400,000.
(6)All of the city’s hospitals,
75% of its factories
and buildings and
90% of its homes were
gone.
Ⅳ.与同桌讨论、理解下列长难句并尝试翻译成汉语
1.Mice ran out of the fields looking for places to hide.
句子结构分析:现在分词短语looking for places to
hide在句中表
伴随,作
伴随状语。
翻译:
老鼠从地里跑出来找地方藏身。
2.It seemed as if
the world was at an end!
句子结构分析:It seemed as if是固定句型结构,意为“
看起来像是……”。
翻译:
看起来像是到了世界末日!
3.Water, food,and electricity were hard to get.
句子结构分析:本句的结构是:主语+be+
adj.+to do,其中to
do用
主动形式表示
被动
含义。
翻译:
水、电和食物都很难弄到。
4.All hope w as not lost.
句子结构分析: all 与not 连用表示
部分否定。
翻译:
并不是所有的希望都破灭了。
Ⅴ.根据下列提示复述课文
sign damage rescue
——|————|————|——→
before... during... after...
Section
Two Language Points
1. In the farmyards,the chickens and even
the pigs were too nervous to
eat.在农家大院里,鸡甚至是猪都紧张得不想进食。
He is too excited to speak.
他太激动了,说不出话来。
They reached the station too late to catch the train.
他们到火车站太迟了,没赶上火车。
以上句式用了
too...to结构,意思为“
太……而不能……”,表示否定意义。但是当
too...to...用来修饰表示态度、情绪、倾向等的形容词时,如anxious,eager,glad,happy,
pleased,ready,willing等,不定式为
肯定意义。
He remarked he was too delighted to visit our city.
他说他很高兴访问我市。
(1)这个箱子太重,提不起来。
The box is too heavy to lift.
(2)老师们很乐意接受对他们的教学方法提出的建议。
Teachers are too glad to accept the
suggestions on their teaching method.
2. In the city,the water pipes in some
buildings cracked and
burst.在市内,有些建筑物里的水管爆裂了。
He felt he would burst with anger and shame.
他恼羞成怒,都要气炸了。
The dam burst under the weight of water.
大坝在水的巨大压力下溃决了。
He burst into the room without knocking.
他没敲门就闯进了屋子。
The sun burst through the clouds.
太阳破云而出。
The words burst from her in an angry rush.
她脱口说出了那一堆气话。
There was a burst of laughter in the next room.
隔壁房间突然爆发出一阵笑声。
burst既是名词也是
动词,意为“
爆炸;猛冲;爆发;突然出现”。
burst into突然闯入,突然……起来,后接名词
burst into tears/laughter突然哭/笑起来
burst into a room(闯)进房间
burst out突然开始,后接
v.ing形式;(战争、疾病等)突然发生(=break
out)
burst out crying/laughing突然哭/笑起来
burst in突然插嘴,打断谈话;突然来到
(1)He suddenly
burst into tears/burst out crying
(哭了起来).
(2)The audience
burst into cheers/burst out cheering
(爆发了一阵欢呼声).
(3)The war
burst out/broke out (爆发).
3. It seemed as if the world was at an
end!仿佛到了世界末日!
①You look/looked as if you had seen a ghost.
你的神色看起来像撞到鬼了。
②He looks as if he were an artist.
看上去他好像是个艺术家似的。
③She speaks English so fluently as if she had studied
English in America.
她讲英语很流利,就像在美国学习过似的。
④It seems as if it’s going to rain.
看起来好像要下雨了。
⑤It seemed as if he wasn’t satisfied with your work.
看来他好像对你的工作不满意。
as if系从属连词,意为“
好像”。根据情况,as
if从句中可使用真实语气,如例句
④⑤,
表示事实如此;从句也可用虚拟语气,如例句
①②③,表示事实并非如此。as if从句表示
的动作如果指现在的动作,从句的谓语用
一般过去时(be用
were);如果表示过去的动作,
从句中用
过去完成时;如果指将来,则用would+
动词原形。
as if从句的主语如果和主句的主语一致,同时从句的谓语中含有be的某种形式,这时可以
把从句的主语和be省去,后面保留介词短语、分词短语或不定式短语等形式。
He shook his head as if to say “No”.他摇了摇头,似乎想说“不”。
When he had finished,he waited as if for a reply.
讲完后,他等着,仿佛在等一个答复。
He looked around as if for help.
他环视四周,好像在寻求帮助。
(1)It seems as if she
the novel but in fact
she’s never heard of it at all.
A.had read
B.has read
C.read
D.would read
答案 A
(2)The man we followed suddenly stopped and looked as if
whether he was going in
the right direction.
A.seeing
B.having seen
C.to see
D.to have
seen
答案 C
(3)Eliza remembers everything exactly as if it
yesterday.
A.was happening
B.happens
C.has happened
D.happened
答案 D
4. Twothirds of them died or were injured
during the earthquake.三分之二的人在地震中受
伤或死去。
I was injured in a street accident.
我在一次车祸中受了伤。
John fell off the tree and injured his back.
约翰从树上摔下来把背部摔伤了。
injure,词性为
动词,意为“
损害,伤害”。
injury
n.伤害,损伤
injured
adj.受伤的
the injured受伤的人;伤员(表示一类人)
injure,hurt,wound,harm
(1)injure多指造成容颜、机能的损害;在事故中受伤。
(2)hurt一般指精神上或肉体上受到伤害,有强烈的疼痛感。
(3)wound指(人)在战斗、攻击中受伤。
(4)harm常用于口语,一般用作及物动词,表示“对……有害/损害”。 吸烟太多会损害你的健康。
You will
harm your health
by smoking too
much.
5. In fifteen terrible seconds a large city lay in
ruins.在可怕的15秒内,一座大城市就沦为了废墟。
He wanted to become a doctor but his mother’s death was the
ruin of his hope.
他想当医生,但他母亲的死使他的希望破灭了。
She poured water over my painting and ruined it.
她把水浇在我的画上,将画毁掉了。
We visited the ruins of the temple.
我们参观了那个庙宇的遗迹。
The castle is now in ruins.
城堡现在已成废墟。
ruin
动词或名词,意为“
毁灭,毁坏”,其复数形式ruins意为“
废墟,遗迹”,in
ruins
意为“
成为废墟”。
bring sb. to ruin毁灭某人
come/go to ruin毁灭
The fire left the temple
.
A.ruin
B.in ruin
C.ruins
D.in
ruins
答案 D
6. Everywhere they looked nearly
everything was
destroyed.所见之处,几乎一切都被毁了。
①His dog follows him everywhere he goes.
无论到哪里,他那条狗总跟着他。
②I can’t find my pen though I’ve looked everywhere.
我到处找那支钢笔,可就是找不到。
③Everywhere seemed silent.
万籁俱寂。
④Fire destroyed the forest.
大火烧毁了森林。
⑤The heavy storms destroyed a good part of our crops.
几场暴雨把大部分庄稼都毁坏了。
在例①中,everywhere用作
连词,引导
状语从句,意为“
无论何处”;在例②中词性是
副
词,意为“
到处,处处”,在例③中词性是
名词,意为“
每个地方”。在例④⑤中,
destroy词性是
动词,意为“
破坏,毁坏,消灭”。
destroy,damage,ruin
(1)destroy指彻底的损坏,常含不能或很难修复的意思。destroy可接人,也可以接物。
(2)damage损坏,毁坏,指部分损坏,降低某物的价值。damage通常接物。
(3)ruin一般指对物体或生命彻底的破坏,但往往是非暴力的,也不是一次打击的结果。常
指对美好的或希望中的事物的破坏。
用destroy,damage,ruin的适当形式填空
(1)What left the town in
ruins?
(2)The fire
destroyed their houses and they became
homeless.
(3)The fire did great
damage to the town.
7. Some of the rescue workers and doctors
were trapped under the ruins.有些医生和营救人
员被困在了废墟下。
The lifeboat was sent out to rescue the sailors from the
sinking ship.
救生艇被派出去救沉船上的水手。
The rescue team came to the visitors’ rescue on the
island.
救援队去营救岛上的游客。
The car was trapped in the deep snow.
车陷在深雪中了。
I was trapped into signing a confession.
我被诱骗在供词上签了字。
rescue,名词或
动词,意为“
营救”,rescue
sb.from...意为“
从……中把人救出来”;
the rescue team意为“救援队”;come/go to sb.’s
rescue意为“
营救某人”。be trapped in/
by...意为“
困在……中”;
trap sb.into doing
sth./sth.意为“诱骗某人做某事”。
be caught in=be stuck in=be trapped in均意为“困在……中”。
(1)The soldiers have tried to go to
rescue in the lake.
A.the boy
B.their
C.the
D.the boy’s
答案 D
(2)The girl cried because she
the
elevator.
A.has trapped in
B.had trapped by
C.was trapped with
D.was trapped in
答案 D
8. All hope was not
lost.并不是所有的希望都破灭了。
Not all the answers are right.
=All the answers are not right.
并非所有的答案都对。
Not every boy likes football.
= Every boy does not like football.
并不是每个男孩都喜欢足球。
Both of them don’t like English.
他们俩并不都喜欢英语。
以上例句在意义上都表示
部分否定,译为“
并不是所有的都……;两者不都……”;其构
成条件是
not+all/every/both...或
all/every/both...+not。
“all,every,both等全肯定词+not+谓语动词”或“not+all,every,both等全肯定词+
谓语动词”构成部分否定。所谓全肯定词,是指含有全体意义的代词与副词,常见的有:
all,both,always,every(everybody,everyone,everything,everywhere)等。如果表示全
部否定,要分别用none,neither,never,no,nobody,nothing,nowhere。
Neither of them is doctors.他们俩都不是医生。
No boy likes football. 没有一个男孩喜欢足球。
(1)All men here are not honest.
这儿的人并非都诚实。
(2)Both of the brothers don’t like the film.
兄弟俩并不都喜欢这部电影。
(3)Not everything went well with him.
他并非每件事情都顺利。
(4)I never get up late.
我从不晚起床。
(5)None of my friends smoke.
我的朋友都不吸烟。
(6)Nothing is needed.
什么都不需要。
9 To the north of the city,most of the 10,000
miners were rescued from the coal mines
there.在城市的北部,有一个有万名矿工的煤矿,其中多数人得救了。
①To the south of the mountain,there is a river.
在山的南面有一条河。
②To the east of the village lies a factory.
村东有个工厂。
③East of the town is a tower.
城东有个塔。
在例①中,to the south of the mountain在句中作
状语。在例②中,表示方位的to
the east of
the village置于句首,本句用了
倒装结构,该短语也可省略为像例③的
east of
the
village形式。
方位词位于句首时,常用句式为:(To the)East/West...+动词+主语。
stands a tower.
A.To east of the hill
B.The east of the hill
C.In the east of the hill
D.East of the hill
地球的一个不眠之夜
河北省东北部的农村不断有些怪事发生。三天来,村子里的井水升升降降,起起伏伏。农夫注意到,水井的井壁上有深深的裂缝,裂缝里冒出臭气。农家大院里的鸡,甚至猪都紧张得不想吃食。老鼠从田地里跑出来找地方藏身。鱼缸和池塘里的鱼会往外跳。在1976年7月28日凌晨3点左右,有些人看到天上一道道明亮的光。即使天空没有飞机,在唐山城外也可以听到飞机声。在市内,有些建筑物里的水管爆裂开来。但是,唐山市的一百万居民几乎都没有把这些情况当一回事,当天晚上照常睡着了。
在凌晨3点42分,一切都开始摇晃起来。世界似乎到了末日!二十世纪最大地震中的一次就在唐山市正下方11公里处发生了。100公里以外的北京市都感到了地震,全国1/3的地方都有震感。一条8公里长30米宽的巨大裂缝横穿房舍、马路和渠道。地上一些洞穴冒出了蒸气。石头山变成了泥沙河。在可怕的15秒钟内,一座大城市就沉沦在一片废墟之中。人们遭受的灾难极为深重。2/3的人在地震中死去或受伤。成千上万个家庭遇难,许多孩子变成了孤儿。死伤的人数达到40多万。
幸存的人们又怎么能相信这是自然现象呢?人们无论朝哪里看,哪里的一切都几乎被毁了。所有的市内医院、75%的工厂和建筑物、90%的家园都消失了。残砖就像秋天的红叶覆盖着大地,然而它们是不可能被风刮走的。两座大坝垮了,多数桥梁不是塌了就是无法安全通行了。铁轨如今成了一条条废钢。好几万头牛再也挤不出奶来。50万头猪和几百万只鸡全都死了。井里满是沙子,而不是水。人们惊呆了。接着,在下午晚些时候,又一次和第一次一样强烈的地震震撼着唐山。有些医生和救援人员被困在废墟下面。更多的房屋倒塌了。水、电和食物都很难弄到。人们开始纳闷,这场灾难还会持续多久。
并不是所有的希望都破灭了。地震后不久,部队派了15万名战士到唐山来协助救援人员。数十万的人得到了救助。部队人员组成小分队,将受困的人们挖出来,将死者掩埋。在唐山市的北边,有一个万名矿工煤矿,其中多数人得救了。援救人员为那些家园被毁的幸存者盖起了避难所。用火车、卡车和飞机向市内运来了水。慢慢地,这座城市又开始出现了生机。
Section Three Grammar
定语从句(Ⅰ)
1.Titanic is
the ship that sank
after hitting an iceberg.
2.Rose and Jack are
the lovers who met
on the ship.
3.
The earthquake that/
which hit
the city in 1906
was the
biggest in American history.
4.We don’t know the number of
people that/
who
lost their homes in the
earthquake of 1906.
以上4句的斜体部分都是对其前的名词进行
修饰限制的,即作了该名词的
定语。定语是用
来限定、修饰
名词或
代词的,主要由形容词担任。此外,名词,代词,数词,分词,副
词,不定式以及介词短语也可以来担任,也可以由
一个从句即定语从句来担任。单词作定
语时通常放在它所修饰的词之前,作
前置定语;短语和从句作定语时则放在所修饰的词之
后,作
后置定语。
定语从句是由关系代词或关系副词引导的从句,其作用是作定语修饰主句的某个名词性成
分,相当于形容词,所以又称为形容词性从句,一般紧跟在它所修饰的先行词后面。如以
上例句中的斜体部分。
关系词:引导定语从句的关联词称为关系词,关系词有关系代词和关系副词。关系代词有
that,which,who,whom,whose,as等;关系副词有where,when,why等。关系词常
有3个作用:1.引导定语从句。2.代替先行词。3.在定语从句中担当一个成分。
先行词:被定语从句修饰的名词、代词称为先行词,如以上例句中的划线部分。
1.that指人或物,在从句中作主语、宾语或表语,作宾语时可以省略。
The house
(that) I’m going to buy
faces south.
Jane has borrowed the book
that was
written by Lao She.
2.which 指物,在句中作主语或宾语,作宾语时可以省略。
I’m not interested in the book
which has
just been published.
I showed him the letter
(which) I
received this morning.
3.who、whom指人,在从句中who作主语和宾语,whom只能作宾语;作宾语时二者都可
以省略。
The girl (whom)
I called just now is from
America.
The boys
who are playing football
are from Class One.
4.whose 指人或物,在从句中作定语。
The girl
whose father had given us a
report got first.
That’s the mach ine
whose parts are too
small to see.
5.限制性定语从句中只能用that的几种情况
(1)当先行词是anything,everything,nothing
(something 除外),few,all,none,little,
some等代词时,或者是由every,any,all,some,no,little,few,much,each等修饰时。
Have you taken down everything (that) Mr.Li
has said?
There seems to be nothing that seems
impossible for him in the world.
All that can be done has been done.
There is little (that) I can do for
you.
Any man that/who has a sense of duty won’t
do such a thing.
(2)当先行词被序数词、形容词最高级、the only、the
very来修饰或当先行词前面有who,which等疑问代词时。
The first place that they visited in London
was the Big Ben.
This is the best film that I have
seen.
Wang Hua is the only person in our school
that will attend the meeting.
Who is the man that is standing
there?
Which is the Tshirt that fits me
most?
(3)当先行词既有人,也有动物或者物体时。
Can you remember the scientist and his
theory that we have learned?
(4)当关系代词在定语从句中作表语时。
The village is no longer the one that it
used to be 10 years ago.
Ⅰ.Fill in the blanks with who,whom,whose,which and
that.
1.The man
who/whom/that I saw told me to wait.
2.The man to
whom I spoke was a foreigner.
3.I know a boy
whose father is an acrobat(杂技演员).
4.He saw a house
whose windows were all broken.
5.All the apples
that fall are eaten by wild boars.
6.Can you think of anyone
that/who could look after
him?
7.This is the best hotel
that I know.
8.He showed us a machine
whose parts were too small to be
seen.
Ⅱ.翻译句子
1.他指给我看他画的画。
He showed me the picture that he drew.
2.我不认识那个和你说话的女孩。
I don’t know the girl whom/that/who you speak
to.
3.她是一个叫玛丽的女孩。
She is a girl who is called Mary.
4.那些正在打网球的男孩是我的朋友。
Those boys who are playing tennis are my
friends.
5.你记不记得我们一起度过的那一天?
Do you remember the day that we spent
together?
Section Four Using Language
Ⅰ.Leadin
1.Have you ever written a speech?
2.What is a speech?
Speech means an act of speaking formally to a group of
listeners.
3.What do you have to consider when you are writing a speech?
Please discuss it in pairs.
(1)Who is the audience? (2)How can we express ourselves
clearly?
Ⅱ.What should you include in your speech when you try to write a
speech? Read the letter on
Page 30 and imagine you are the student who was invited to
give a speech.Now write a
short speech,in which you should follow the points in
Exercise 2 on Page 30.
Language Points
1. This frightened boy whose mother was
lost...is looking for her now.那个受了惊吓的男
孩……正在找走失的妈妈。
Don’t stand so near the well.You are frightening me.
别站得离井这么近,你吓死我了。
The frightened girl hid herself behind the big tree.
这个吓坏了的小女孩藏在了大树后。
I still remember the frightening experience on the lonely
island.
我依然记得在那个偏僻的岛上的骇人的经历。
frighten,及物动词,意为“
使惊吓,使害怕”;frightened,形容词,意为“
吓坏的,害
怕的”;frightening,词性
形容词,意为“
令人害怕的”。
fright
n.惊吓,害怕
用frighten的适当形式填空
(1)It’s
frightening to think how easily children can
be hu rt.
(2)There was a
frightening storm last night.
(3)Don’t be
frightened.We’re not going to hurt
you.
(4)Some of the children cried out in
fright.
(5)The young lady was
frightened to drive
alone.
2. Congratulations! We are pleased t
o tell you that you have won the high school speaking
competition about new
Tangshan.恭喜你!我们很高兴地告诉你,你在以新唐山为主题的
演讲比赛 中获得第一名。
Congratulations! I hear you’ve passed the
examinations.
祝贺你!听说你通过考试了。
Please accept my congratulations on your marriage.
请接受我对您的新婚祝贺。
Congratulations on the success to you!
祝贺你,你成功了!
congratulation,词性
名词,常用其
复数形式表达祝贺;“祝贺某人某事”表达为
congratulations on sth.to sb.。
congratulate
v.祝贺
congratulate sb. on sth.祝贺某人某事
我祝贺你成功。
(1)I
congratulate you
on your success.
(2)
Congratulations on your success.
3. Your speech was heard by a group of five
judges,all of whom agreed that it was the best
one this year.评委会的五个评委听了你的演讲,都认为你的演讲是今年最好的。
The judge thought highly of your speech.
这个裁判对你的演讲高度评价。
Don’t judge a person by his appearance.不要以貌取人。
judge,名词,意为“
裁判员,法官”;也可作动词,意为“
断定,判决”。
judge...by/from...意为“
根据……判断……”。
judging by/from...意为“从……来判断”,在句中作插入语,不受句子主语的限制。
Judging from his accent,he comes from Shandong.
从口音判断,他来自山东。
Judging by his look,he wasn’t pleased. 从表情上看他不高兴。
(1)Don’t judge a book
its cover.
A.from
B.about
C.for
D.with
答案 A
(2)
from his words,his work is going well.
A.Judge
B.To judge
C.Judged
D.Judging
答案 D
课文翻译
中国,河北
唐山市政府办公室
200
年7月5日
亲爱的
:
恭喜你!
我们很高兴地告诉你,你在以新唐山为主题的中学演讲比赛中获得第一名。评委会的五位评委听了你的演讲,都认为你的演讲是今年最好的。你的父母和你的学校会为你而骄傲!
下个月我们市将开放一个新公园,以纪念在那次可怕的灾难中死去的人们。并向那些曾经为幸存者提供过帮助的人们致敬。我们办公室想请你在7月28日上午11点给来公园的参观者进行演讲。你知道,三十
年前的这一天正是唐山发生地震的日子。
在这个特殊的日子里,我们邀请你把家人和朋友一起带来。
诚挚的,
张沙
Section Five Writing
给你支招
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新闻报道的结构一般分为四个部分:(一)标题、(二)导语、(三)主体、(四)结语。标题是新闻的题目,是编辑对最有新闻价值内容的浓缩、概括、提炼和再创造。撰写标题是为了撷取新闻要点、诠释新闻意义、吸引读者阅读。在今天繁忙的现代社会中,报纸的读者大多是标题浏览者。导语是消息开头的第一段或第一句话,它扼要地揭示出消息的核心内容。主体是消息的主要部分,它用充足的事实表现主题,是对导语内容的进一步开展和阐释。新闻报道的结语一般是最后一句话或者一段话,通常对全文内容作概括性的总结,或对新闻事件的发展趋势作出预测。有时,作者根据报道的事实在结语中提出令人深思的问题。
一般来说,标题、导语和主体是构成新闻报道的必不可少的三部分。可根据新闻报道的内容来确定是否要结语或其他内容(如事件和历史背景等).有时,还可将它们暗含在主体中。
在写新闻报道时,首先要注意新闻的标题具有语言幽默风趣的特点,有较强的吸引力。同时,写作依据的材料要充分,要用事实来说话,语言力求简洁。最后,报道中要有亮点,能引人深思或能让人产生强烈的兴趣。
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品味鉴赏
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品味佳作
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5月1日,高二(3)班的学生志愿者Li Yue 和Zhang Hua
去阳光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing
Home)开展志愿者活动(送水果、打扫、聊天等)。假如你是校英语报的记者,请按下列要点用英语写一则100词左右的新闻报道。
1.时间、地点、任务、活动;
2.老人们的反应;
3.简短评论。
注意:报道的标题和记者姓名已给出(不计入总词数)。
Student Volunteers
Brought Sunshine to the Elderly
...
By Chen Jie,School
Newspaper
Student Volunteers
Brought Sunshine to the Elderly
Li Yue and Zhang Hua are in
Class Three,Grade Two.They went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did
some voluntary works(应改为work).When they arrived
at (应删掉) there,Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly
welcomed,and they gave (应改为presented) the elderly
with flowers and fruits.They started working at once,cleaning the
windows and swept (应改为sweeping) the floor.
∧(应添加After) Everything was done,they sat in the yard
chat (应改为chatting) with the elderly.
It was time for the
volunteers to leave,the elderly thanked ∧(应添加them
for) their kindness.They said it was such beautiful a
day (应改为such a beautiful day或such改为so) that they
would remember it forever.
Li Yue and Zhang Hua were
very happy.What they did has taken (应改为brought) joy
to others and enriched their own lives.
By Chen Jie,School
Newspaper
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Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the
Elderly
On May Day,Li Yue and Zhang Hua,students
from Class Three,Grade Two,went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did
some voluntary work.Upon their arrival,Li Yue and Zhang Hua were
warmly welcomed,and respectfull y,they presented the elderly with
flowers and fruits.
Then,they started working at once,cleaning the windows and sweeping
the floor.Everything done,they sat in the yard chatting with the
elderly.
When it was time for the volunteers to
leave,the elderly thanked them for their kindness.They said it was
such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.
Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy.What
they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own
lives.
By Chen Jie,School Newspaper
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以我之见
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本文用了较高级的表达,如Upon their
arrival,present...with...,enrich their own lives;独立主格结构:Everything
done,they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly.
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【趁热打铁】
假如今年6月2日澳大利亚中学生代表团(delegation)一行十人到你校参观,请以“The Australian Middle
School Student Visit Our School”为题写一篇新闻报道,投寄给当地的《中学生英文报》。主要内
容如下:
1.该团上午9时到校,受到师生的热烈欢迎。
2.9点30分举行欢迎大会,校长和外宾分别在会上讲了话。
3.会后参观了校园、实验室、图书馆及校办工厂,并听了英语课。
4.下午3时外宾与部分师生座谈。
5.下午5时代表团离校。
【参考范文】
The Australian Middle School Student Visit Our School
A delegation of 10 Australian middle school
students visited our school on June 2nd.They arrived at around 9
a.m..Everyone in our school were really excited about this and gave
them warm welcomes.The welcoming ceremony started at 9∶30.Our
headmaster and foreign friends gave some speeches
respectively.After the meeting,our foreign friends visited our
classrooms,labs,libraries and schooloriented factories.They felt
very happy about them and they decided to take an English class
with us.At 3 p.m. foreign friends have a symposium with part of our
students and teachers.The delegation team left at 5 p.m..Both they
and we had a good time.
检验真知——目标回顾
Ⅰ.重点单词
1.
suffering n.苦难;痛苦→
suffer vt.&
vi.遭受
2.
extreme adj.极度的→
extremely
adv.极度地
3.
injure vt.损害;伤害→
injury n.
4.
shock vt.&
vi.(使)震惊;震动→
shocking/shocked adj.
5.
electricity n.电;电流;电学→
electric
adj.电气科学的;与电有关的
6.
frighten vt.使惊吓;吓唬→
frightened
adj.受惊吓的→
frightening adj.令人恐惧的
7.
congratulation n.祝贺;(复数)贺词→
congratulate
v.祝贺
8.
express vt.表示;表达;
n.快车;速递→
expression
n.表达,表示;词语
9.
burst vi.爆裂;爆发;
n.突然破裂;爆发
10.
event n.事件;大事
11.
ruin n.废墟;毁灭;
vt.毁灭;使破产
12.
destroy vt.破坏;毁坏;消灭
13.
track n.轨道;足迹;痕迹
14.
rescue n.&
vt.援救;营救
15.
trap vt.使陷入困境;
n.陷阱;困境
16.
disaster n.灾难;灾祸
17.
bury vt.埋葬;掩埋;隐藏
18.
shelter n.掩蔽;掩蔽处;避身处
19.
harm n.&
vt.损失;损害
20.
judge n.裁判员;法官;
vt.断定;判断;判决
Ⅱ.重点短语
1.
dig out掘出;发现
2.
be buried in埋头于;专心于
3.
judge from...从……判断
4.be proud
of为……而自豪;引以为荣
5.break
out爆发;发生
6.get
rid of离开,逃脱
7.a (great) number of
许多
8.the number of
……的数量/数字
9.
at once/right away立刻;马上
10.
burst into laughter/burst out laughing突然大笑
11.
as if仿佛;好像
12.
at an end结束;终结
13.
be/lie in ruins严重受损;破败不堪
Ⅲ.重点句型
1.In the farmyards,the chickens and even the pigs were
too
nervous
to eat.
2.It seemed
as if the world
was at
an end!
3.In fifteen terrible seconds a large city
lay in
ruins.
4.
All hope was
not lost.
5.
To the north of the city,most of the 10,000 miners
were rescued from the coal mines there.
Ⅳ.重点语法
定语从句是由关系代词或关系副词引导的从句,其作用是作
定
语修饰主句的
某个名词性成分;引导定语从句的关联词称为
关系词,关系词有
关系代词和
关系副词。关系代词有
that,which,who,whom,whose,as等;关系副词有
where,when,why等。关系词常有3个作用:1.引导
定语从句;2.代替
先行词;3.在定语从句中
担当一个成分。