修改英文:介绍钟南山
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修改英文:
介绍钟南山
Source: Zhihu
(prepared by: alexcwlin; edited by: Adam
Lam)
(哇，有无搞错，84
岁个样咁青春，他吃什么的，哈哈)
Question:
介绍钟南山
高考书面表达第一篇常考题材通常考点是有关人物介绍。此题所涉及的人物是大家非常熟悉的钟南山，同时也是国人追逐的偶像。每个学生都能够有话可说，大家对其应该比较感兴趣，符合新高考英语科目的命题方向。
请你根据下面的提示，用英语对钟南山作简单介绍，写一篇150至200词的英语作文。
1.钟南山，1936年10月出生于南京，是21世纪最出名的医学家之一。
2.1953年，就读于广东实验中学；1960年，毕业于北京医学院并留校任教。
3.在首届全国运动会上，钟南山夺得男子400米栏冠军，创造了当时的全国纪录。
4.2003年春，SARS在中国和世界爆发，以钟南山为代表的医护工作者经长期努力,抗击了非典；2004年，钟南山被评为“感动中国2003年度”十大人物之一。
5.他在医学领域工作60多年，是一位受国人尊敬的好医
生。
alexcwlin comments:
A Brief Introduction of Dr. Zhong
Nanshan
a. edited by:
alexcwlin; reviewed by: Adam Lam
b.
original prepared by: Bambi Lu
a. Dr. Zhong Nanshan, a
celebrated medical scientist of the 21st century, was
born in October 1936, Nanjing, Jiangsu
Province.
b.
Dr. Zhong Nanshan was born in October 1936 in Nanjing,
Jiangsu Province. He is one of the famous medical scientists in the
21st century.
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a. He entered
Guangdong Experimental High School in
1953.
b.
He studied at Guangdong
Experimental High School in 1953. (Note: This one sounds like he
only studied in that high school for 1 year).
a.
In 1960, he graduated from
Beijing Medical College (now known as Peking University Health
Science Center). Afterwards, he stayed behind to
teach.
b.
After graduating from Beijing
Medical College (now known as Peking University Health Science
Center) in 1960, he worked as a teacher in his Alma Mater.
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a. During the first
national track-and-field competition, he won the gold medal in
men’s 400m hurdles and set a new record in that event.
b. In the 1st National
Games of PRC, Zhong Nanshan won the gold medal of the men’s 400m
hurdles and created a national record at that time.
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a. The SARS
epidemic broke out and savaged China and the rest of the world in
the spring of 2003.
b.
In the spring of 2003, the SARS
epidemic broke out in China and across the rest of the
world.
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a. Medical workers,
led by Dr. Zhong, fought the virus over a long period of
time.
Dr. Zhong acted as a leading pioneer in the
battle against SARS.
a.
At the early stage, healthcare
workers knew very little about the disease and there were no
effective treatments or drugs available.
b. In the process,
healthcare workers knew very little about SARS and most people had
no natural defenses against the disease.
a.
Despite the limitations, Dr.
Zhong and his team worked diligently and came through with
remarkable results.
b.
However, after working day and
night for several months, Dr. Zhong and other medical workers
achieved remarkable result.
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a. Eventually the
virus, later known as SARS-CoV, was eliminated in China in August
2003.
b.
Eventually, human SARS-CoV was successfully wiped out in
August, 2003 in China.
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a. In 2004, Dr.
Zhong was voted as one of the “2003 Top Ten People Moving
China”.
b. Dr.
Zhong was awarded as one of “The Top Ten People Moving China in
2004”.
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a. Dr. Zhong served
in the medical field for over 60 years, and he is an accomplished
doctor revered by the entire nation of China.
b.
He has been working in the field
of medicine for over 60 years. He is a good doctor who is respected
by all the Chinese people.
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