The Quest---- 英汉简明庄绎传
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The Quest
探索（妙！）
1. Taking the train, the two friends arrived in Berlin in late
October 1922, and went directly to the address of Chou
En-lai.(1.分词开头的句式
2.late October 1922 3. Two friends
)
2. Would this man receive them as fellow
countrymen, or would he treat them with cold suspicion and question
them cautiously about their past careers as militarists?(1.fellow
2.countrymen 3. Or would
he 4.cold suspicion 5.question them cautiously
6.militarists
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7.对照)
3. Chu Teh remembered his age. He was thirty-six,
his youth had passed like a screaming eagle, leaving him old and
disillusioned. (1. Remember 2. Passed like a screaming
eagle 为了生动
3. Leaving
him两种解释
)
4. When Chou En-lai's door opened they saw a slender man
of more than average height with gleaming eyes and a face so
striking that it bordered on the beautiful. Yet it was a manly
face, serious and intelligent, and Chu judged him to be in his
middle twenties.(1. When Chou En-lai’s door opened
2. Slender man of more than average height
with gleaming eyes 3.it bordered on the beautiful
4.manly face
serious and intelligent
5.描写人常常有大串介词短语，译成分句
)
5. Chou was a quiet and thoughtful man, even a
little shy as he welcomed his visitors, urged them to be
seated and to tell how he could help them .(1. Quiet
2. Thoughtful 3.shy
4.welcome 5.how he could help
them并非是帮忙)
6. Ignoring the chair offered him, Chu Teh stood
squarely before this youth more than ten years his junior and in a
level voice told him who he was, what he had done in the past, how
he had fled from Yunnan, talked with Sun Yat-sen, been repulsed by
Chen Tu-hsiu in Shanghai, and had come to Europe to find a new
way of life for himself and a new revolutionary road for
China.(1. The chair offered him 2.squarely
3.a level voice
4.不是包含关系
5.
6. Who he
was身份)
7. He wanted to join the Chinese Communist Part
group in Berlin, he would study and work hard, he would do
anything he was asked to do but return to his old life, which
had turned to ashes beneath his
feet.(1.被动的处理)
8.As he talked Chou En-lai stood facing him, his
head a little to one side as was his habit, listening intently
until the story was told,
and then questioning him.(1.as he talked 2.stood facing him 3. his
head a little to one side as was his habit 4. listening intently 5.
then questioning
him注意语言的简洁
)
9. When both visitors had told their stories,
Chou smiled a little, said he would help them find rooms, and
arrange for them to join the Berlin Communist Group as candidates
until their application had been sent to China and an
answer
received.（1.visitors
2.stories 3. Chou smiled
a little, said he…. 4.candidates 5.
Until两种译法
6.when
通常不译成
当）
10. When the reply came a few months later they
were enrolled as full members, but Chu's membership
was kept a secret from outsiders. (1. When the reply
came a few months later
2.四处被动处理)
总结：速度太快，用词欠考虑；译前应该先分析结构，找点；中文烂；主状谓。
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